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'By the end, it often feels like the review is more about showing how much the reviewer knows rather than telling us if the book at hand is readable, enjoyable, and recommendable.'

YES. I do like Ron Charles reviews in The Washington Post, but NYTimes and the freelance reviews in WaPo leave me cold. Stop showing off and tell me how the book made you *feel*.

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Ron Charles and Carlos Lozada (when he was still at WaPo) made for the best book review department around.

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I'm having my morning coffee and realized that this comments sounds so GROUCHY. Sorry!

I should also have said, Jeremy, that you do an excellent job of explaining enough of what the book is about to let me know if I'm interested — and your personal experience of reading gives me a good idea of the book's vibe. So thank you for that!

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Thank you!

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

Hah, I agreed and didn't think it sounded grouchy. I hate when the book review is more about someone using huge words and giant tangents. I just want to know what they liked or didn't like about the book :)

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I understand a reviewer's desire to make their own writing *good* writing, to compare and contrast with other similar books, to talk about the author — but it's a fine line between providing context with strong writing (and even beautiful writing) and proving how smart/insightful/clever the reviewer can be.

I come from an advertising and web dev background and everything I wrote in my day-job days was meant to be targeted to a specific audience. That's been really helpful in making Strong Sense of Place because when I want to show off/make myself feel smart, I have to ask myself if what I'm writing/saying serves the audience. It's a good editor ;-)

I feel like so many reviewers in mainstream pubs consider the editor or other editors or other critics their audience, rather than the normies like us reading their reviews.

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Yes! It often feels like critics are talking to other critics rather than Normal Readers.

There's definitely nothing wrong with focusing on prose, historical context, connections, etc. — it's all about the tone.

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"It's all about the tone."

I totally agree!! It's the same difference between a bad teacher and a good teacher... one talks down to you, while the other is just excited to share.

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

In a world where award winning books can sit on a shelf in a bookstore right beside the latest schlock with 100,000 amazon 5 stars, but only because it entertains …and for the same price…. book reviews like yours are immensely helpful.

(You pay more for gifted art and live music, but not the written word? Yet , this poor person is glad of it)

Help me avoid mediocre writing, formulaic stories, hidden propaganda, erotica, and unnecessary foul language. Point out books worthy of second reads or passing on to my teenage grandkids. Those that help the reader empathize with situations reflecting real people they would never meet in their own bubble.

Thought provoking, world building, changed my life kind of books. They are out there hidden among the over published, over promoted, trend of the moment, flash in the pan.

Thanks for helping me sort through the stacks to find them. Keep up the good work!!

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There are more books being published than ever before; it's definitely my hope to wade through a lot of that and point out what's worth reading. Thanks Deborah!

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

'Help me avoid mediocre writing, formulaic stories, hidden propaganda, erotica, and unnecessary foul language. Point out books worthy of second reads or passing on to my teenage grandkids. Those that help the reader empathize with situations reflecting real people they would never meet in their own bubble. Thought provoking, world building, changed my life kind of books.'

I am looking for the same kinds of books. I am interested to hear the titles of some of the books you consider to fit this description. Please share.

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

No particular order:

Peace Like a River

All the Light One Cannot See

Jayber Crow

Till We Have Faces

A Tree Grows in Brooklyn

A Gentleman in Moscow

American Childhood

Second Coming, Percy

Beloved

Virgil Wander

Screwtape Letters

Brothers Karamazov

The Giver, Lowry

Book of the Dun Cow

Gilead, Home, Jack, Lila

Everything Sad is Untrue

End of Drum Time

Story of Edgar Sawtelle

Pilgrim’s Inn

The Awakening of Miss Prim

Into the Wild

At the Back of the North Wind

Lots more classics and new authors too.

That was a fun exercise!

We should email/talk

Dbegley900@gmail.com

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What a great list!

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Thanks for the list. Since I have read quite a few of them and agree they were excellent, I will add the ones I haven't read to my TBR list. I trust your taste.

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Wow love this, Deborah. Thank you for sharing!

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

For over 10 years I've been writing short 50 to 250 word notes to myself about each book I read. Just as a way to collect my thoughts, sometimes in shorthand, usually in long form. I try to just record what I enjoyed or didn't enjoy about the book so I can circle back to it at the end of the year, or many years later.

I think for other people sharing their reviews I just want brevity and something that exposes their personality and gets to the heart of why they loved/liked/disliked the book. I enjoy snark and wit, but brevity always :).

I've also been thinking about this a lot as I am building a book review format on Shepherd.com, and I want the format to be focused on building a profile of what that reader loves to read so that I can use that to help them find other people who share their Book DNA, and then use that shared DNA to connect them with books they will love.

If you are curious to see an early preview test here is the format I am playing with: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSfenTlEAe_A4huUeWZpX3hfKCcHDOfjlFJq7ES2E9yGwMbijw/viewform

Learning a lot :)

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Thanks for sharing! We'd all love an alternative to Goodreads. :) I know Storygraph is around, but I just haven't had good luck in getting acquainted with it.

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Thanks!

Storygraph is doing some cool stuff, check out the new book club feature they added :). That said, I think they and hardcover.app are doing more of the book logging approach so they are still 5 star focused (hardcover.app is great and highly recommend checking them out).

I really want to get out of that review format, and instead build a review format designed to help people find books they will love, rather than just like. So trying to really approach this differently :)

(and I hope to offer book logging as well, but with that focus)

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I also leave a short review of each book I read mainly for myself. I am 73 and I may forget that I read it and what I thought. Also I do judge some reviews if that reviewer loved a book I couldn’t finish.. not to take their advice usually. And the same with a book they didn’t like at all and I have it 5 stars.. I know we have very different taste and that is fine. That’s why we have so many different kinds of books!

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Totally agree Ben. Been a follower on your Shepherd journey recently and really like this and rooting for you!

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

Just tried it..,would have liked to be able to add what I didn’t like as well as the positive. Need balance in my comments…an attempt to be well-rounded.

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

Gotcha, added to my notes :)

One of the challenges is that you can only ask people so many questions, so I am trying to balance how much info I need to get to make it helpful, while not so much that people don't spend the time to do it. Hard to find the balance and I am going to review next week once I have data from this batch in. Thank you!

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I love the idea of Book DNA. Current book rec engines rely so much on genre (or in Amazon’s case, buying habits of their other customers) but that never quite gets to the heart of why I love certain books.

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ya I am hoping this works well! We are adding user accounts now, and then in a few months going to add this and start bringing in data I believe. Testing is going well and doing some video interviews now :)

Any chance you are up for a 15 min video interview on the format with me? No worries if not (ben@shepherd.com)

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I want to know how a book made you feel, about what it made you think, what was your experience while reading it, what are your thoughts on the writing, the story, whatever you think is relevant. I don’t need to read the blurb, I can look the book up and read what it is about myself, I want to know what it does to people.

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Exactly — this is why I'm not much interested taking more than a single sentence or two to describe plot.

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

I read reviews for a simple purpose: to determine if the book is worth the investment of my time to read (the true cost of a book isn't the price!). So for me, the review needs to touch on several topics:

-Validate that the publisher's book description (i.e., my initial understanding of the book's topic) is correct, and expand on it as necessary.

-Establish that the reviewer is someone whose opinion I can rely on: truthfulness, knowledge of the genre, clear and grammatical writing, perhaps some personality insights. (This isn't necessary for me in the case of some regular reviewers; for instance, Jeremy's reviews have already proven trustworthy to me.)

-Describe personal reactions to the book, particularly writing structure, theme, character development, pacing, etc. How did the book make the reviewer feel? Did the author have good command of language? Were the characters b8elievable? Did anything stand out, positively or negatively? Was it strictly a pleasure read, or was it enjoyable from the author's use of language, or was it enlightening on a theme or subject?

-Most importantly, did the author consider the book to be a good return on the investment of their time?

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"Validate that the publisher's book description" —> Great point! There's often a disconnect between a book's marketing and what it actually does. Does the material live up to the endorsements on the cover?

Great ideas all around here, Carl. Thanks!

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

Great point about book reviews in big publications! I feel the same way - I dislike reading most reviews from these big names because it seems like 90% of the review is just telling me the entire plot of the story, with just a few lines at the end with their opinion. I often read a review and think "Okay, I have no idea whether I would like this book, but now that I know the whole story I guess I don't need to read it?"

I think this is a big part of why Neha and I hesitate to use the word 'review' in our podcast and newsletter - we are not here to give long summaries of books (there are plenty of places online to find those). We're here to talk about how a book made us feel, what it means, and what it made us think about.

I think one of the biggest things missing in a lot of book reviews is personality - I need to get to know the reviewer to feel like I can trust their recommendations, and to know how to situate their tastes in relation to mine. In that aspect, Substack publications like yours are so helpful! The more consistently I read or listen to someone's views, the more I appreciate what they are saying.

- S

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"what it made us think about" —> Yes, this is always what's on the forefront of my mind when I'm writing about a book. Who cares about describing the plot; I'll get that on Goodreads or whatever. I need to know a reader's *response* to that plot more than anything.

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Exactly! The response is the most interesting part

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'I think this is a big part of why Neha and I hesitate to use the word 'review' in our podcast and newsletter'

Strong agree! On our show, we do recommendations, not reviews — and if we don't love a book, we don't include it in the show. We usually talk about the setup of the story and stand-out characters and setting, then move on to how it made us feel and/or think. No spoilers, obviously. Spoilers are rude ;-)

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Mmm, yes.. that difference between a review and a recommendation. Definitely an interesting distinction and framework.

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That sounds like a nice setup. We talk about books we don't like in addition to the ones we love, and we also talk spoilers - but we always give a spoiler warning!

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Every time a book podcast gives a spoiler warning, an angel gets its wings :-)

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I write music reviews and have written a fair amount of book reviews as well, so it is an interesting topic. I agree with you here. If I am writing a review, it is going to be about something I like. When I first started writing music reviews, I made a few negatory ones, and my editor at the time guided me out of that, as per the standards of his website. It was to give listeners a place to go find something they wanted to listen. This is especially good for artists and writers who may not get enough exposure anyway. No need to tear anyone down who no one has heard much of yet anyway. But as you mentioned, if it is someone established, a poor review compared to other works by them might be needed.

I am sure I am guilty about showing off what else I have read and listened to, and how much I know about it, when writing a review of a book or album. I can get why that is a turn off, if it isn't balanced with an honest take on what is to like and enjoy about a piece of music or book. At the same time, I think that part of the job of the reviewer, and non-fiction writer in general, is to make connections between other literary or musical works. That being said, I avoid all the major and mainstream publications for these things. My first lessons in writing music reviews came from reading very short ones in punk rock zines after all.

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"It was to give listeners a place to go find something they wanted to listen." —> Yeah! This is definitely what I'm going for.

And I definitely agree that there's an impetus to establish connections with other works or with context or whatever.. it's all about the tone you do it with. As long as it's accessible and approachable, I'm all for it. (And that's certainly what I strive to do.)

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Those are great points on context and tone.

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

I find it interesting that negative book reviews frequently drag on, sometimes eloquently, but I’m thinking, “got your point…next”. I rarely finish a negative review, although I may miss something that could inform a decision whether to read the book in spite of a negative review. So many books; so little time.

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Yeah the negative book review is an interesting beast. I'm far more likely to just say, "It wasn't for me." than go on and on about exactly why. It feels so personal when that happens (even if it's not). The exception would perhaps be if it's a negative review of a classic.

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In my own reviews I try to strike a balance between talking about my personal enjoyment and my more analytical thoughts. I tend to enjoy books more when they demand intellectual engagement. But I love a pleasure read too! At the end of the day, I want my book reviews to be intellectual when the book is that way. Reviews (imho) should be a reflection of the book itself.

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Great point! A fluff/entertainment read shouldn't have the same critical scrutiny as something more intellectual — but in big publications, if often does. Which is a shame.

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Agreed. I think this speaks to the success of Goodreads and the bookstagram community. People want reviews from normal people. (Not that any of us are normal, but you know what I mean.)

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I'm always looking for how a book made a reviewer feel, or think, as others have said. My posted book reviews are, like yours, short, and I also post only reviews of books I enjoyed. There's already enough negativity on the internet. I am an eclectic reader so I do take into account the book's genre as well as its intended audience.

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"I do take into account the book's genre as well as its intended audience." —> Yes, definitely! Not every book is for every person, but I've read enough books to have a pretty good idea of what type of reader certain books are likely to appeal to. That's definitely a benefit of reading widely and leaning into varied interests. :)

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Exactly. A fun beach read should not be judged the same way as literary fiction. But if *any* story is boring, then it's boring!

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

I like a good objective review not a sales job by the publisher

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Oh gosh, so true! Publishers have a way larger impact on the books we read than we care to admit.

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Apr 23Liked by Jeremy Anderberg

For me with a review of any medium, I treat them more as a coming attractions sort of thing. I’m interested in knowing what’s coming out , what’s the general impression of the thing , etc. I’ve used your newsletter almost like the old scholastic book orders.

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That's great to hear, thanks Cody!

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I am old and time is short. I want to read interesting books; the kind of book(s) I don't want to put down: fiction or non-fiction. The book review should be all about the reader and the reviewer.

Many books I read are better as long articles: too much fluff and unnecessary historical perspective.

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Hi Jeremy think my recommendations are similar in that I generally also only publish recommendations that I have enjoyed. My original ones were more for me as way to record what I was reading, a one line ish summary and some details about the book, chapters, length that sort of stuff. It s only been relatively recently that I have posted these and started to get a few others who seem to benefit from them. Definitely agree that it’s a subset of readers, but for me happy with what o put out, and live your ones as helps me widen the books I don’t know about. For example you review of the Black count, by Tom Reiss was timely as I had not long finished the Count of Monte Cristo, so to find this book existed was fantastic. Keep it up!

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I totally get where you're coming from! Book reviews can sometimes feel like they're more about the reviewer flexing their literary muscles than actually helping you decide if a book is worth your time. Personally, I'm all about straightforward reviews that tell me if a book is enjoyable and who might like it. I appreciate your approach of keeping it concise and positive in your newsletter.

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Jeremy, I tend not to read a lot of the traditional reviews that follow the format of - you should read this book because.... I also don't enjoy the big heads who make their reviews more about how smart they are. I enjoy reviews that tie the book in with life. How did it make you feel? What things connected to your real life? Did you learn something? That is what I enjoy reading and also the type of thing I tend to write. I sure there is an appetite for all types of different reviews so none of these are necessarily good or bad but just different preferences. Thanks!

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